Sorrow by laurennaType PoetryCatagory DarkPublished 18, 2007Last Edit 18, 2007Description First poem on here, know the titles bit crap but couldnt think of anything else.. Pretty wild, pretty deep. Stats & Comments Viewed timesBookmark on Del. icio. us Current Rank This was beautiful. They seemed bored and leave him, thinking as their on their way, What was this more mans downfall. They sing and one dances with him where he fell. One who does not believe, yet he pleads for some soul to help him avoid his fall. And they watch as he falls. Awesome post, well done…
Awesome post, well done…PollyAtheist his whole lifenow he kneels down and pleadsthat some forgiving soul find him gripped in the icy hand of fearhis face pale and grey with single salty tearHe suddenly bellows to the mocking darkness wracked in shuddering fit of fright while glowing angels swoop in and surround him cooing and singing songs of the night…Ooh, dark and moody, Im afraid Im going to have to love this verse. Pretty wild, pretty deep.
Sorrow by laurennaType PoetryCatagory DarkPublished 18, 2007Last Edit 18, 2007Description First poem on here, know the titles bit crap but couldnt think of anything else.. Even as help is arriving he is still so unsure that he yells into the night. Awesome post, well done…PollyAtheist his whole lifenow he kneels down and pleadsthat some forgiving soul find him gripped in the icy hand of fearhis face pale and grey with single salty tearHe suddenly bellows to the mocking darkness wracked in shuddering fit of fright while glowing angels swoop in and surround him cooing and singing songs of the night…
And they watch as he falls. Thanks for the review. was so sad throughout this entire thing..I think Sorrow fits this peice fabulously.
Sorrow by laurennaType PoetryCatagory DarkPublished 18, 2007Last Edit 18, 2007Description First poem on here, know the titles bit crap but couldnt think of anything else.. Stats & Comments Viewed timesBookmark on Del. icio. us Current Rank This was beautiful. One who does not believe, yet he pleads for some soul to help him avoid his fall.
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